Goodnight. (Remake)

wow, your sense of detail and precision have really improved! I like your color blending, especially on her skin. your sense of human anatomy has also become more accurate. there's just one thing I think you lost in the redraw--with so much focus on each small part of the drawing being perfect, the sum total is much less expressive. her eyes, while being beautifully drawn eyes on their own, don't seem to really be part of a whole face that conveys emotion, or part of a person for whom the viewer should feel something. still, now that you have your technique at such a higher level, i'm sure that emotional connection with your subjects will be free to return to your work!
p.s. ignore the star ratings I gave you, I kind of just made them up. the above paragraph is what I really wanted to share.