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Autumn Breeze

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A commission for someone in CDE ^^ Her avatar is really beautiful. And I had a real fun drawing it. 

I couldn't come up with a great title, forgive me. OTL

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hey~
Nice work on your body structure. The general proportions in the girl look really cool <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> . I think the dress is really pretty for some reason, lol.

Some things you might want to look into though are the hair, the shoes and your background choice. The hair looks really nice and textured, but it lacks sufficient detail and looks a bit too volumized for comfort. The girl's shoes look a bit too rounded off... if the shoes were a bit flatter, the overall picture would feel better. Your background also looks slightly plain. If you tinted the background a neutral tone or a light warm color, it may give your piece a more autumn-ish feel. I also have to say, your petals (cherry blossoms perhaps? If so...) only bloom in spring. Cherry blossoms die in the early summer and is replaced by burgundy leaves, so it doesn't quite make sense.

The way you blurred the further petals and leaves in the back is really cool and adds a component of distance to your piece. The girl has a nice, shy expression, which balances her dress hue quite well.

Good work! II like it :3